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kinu

kinu

Hello, My name is Kinu. For improve my English skills, I started to write daily life in English.
Please check my English. So please help me to improve my English skills.
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David

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My only main critiques for this paragraph is that when you first said “Hello, My name is Kinu.” you shouldn’t capitalize “My” There’s some exceptions but generally you should only capitalize names and the first word of a sentence!

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David
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Also avoid using “For” at the beginning of sentences, you should use “for” in a possessive manner, so you would use it like this: “This chocolate is for you” the correct word to use in your second sentence is “To” If you need me to explain anything further message me!
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If you want me

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Thanks[大泣き] Please check this paragraph.
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Hello, My name is Kinu. For improve my English skills, I started to write daily life in English.