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Today I went to the ramen shop that concept JOJO. Dispite it was so cold outside, I stood in line for a hour. The time standing in line was so hard, but I really enjoyed the ramen shop. The orner was so interesting, there were many JOJO's goods. After I finished to eat ramen, I bought the corn soup and yogurt at the convenience store. The total price was a little expensive, but I was satisfied.

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Today, I went to a ramen shop with a JOJO concept. Despite the cold weather, I stood in line for an hour. Waiting was tough, but I truly enjoyed the ramen experience. The owner was interesting, and there were many JOJO-themed decorations.
After finishing my ramen, I bought corn soup and yogurt at the convenience store. The total price was a bit high, but I was satisfied.
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かにかま

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もしかして大阪のラーメン屋ですか!!

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そうですよ!! 店長さんがオラオラしてくれるあの店です
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今夜が山田

今夜が山田

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気になるお店だな

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ジョジョラーの間で有名なお店です😌
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