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Today I went to the ramen shop that concept JOJO. Dispite it was so cold outside, I stood in line for a hour. The time standing in line was so hard, but I really enjoyed the ramen shop. The orner was so interesting, there were many JOJO's goods. After I finished to eat ramen, I bought the corn soup and yogurt at the convenience store. The total price was a little expensive, but I was satisfied.
stand in line:列に並ぶ
Today, I went to a ramen shop with a JOJO concept. Despite the cold weather, I stood in line for an hour. Waiting was tough, but I truly enjoyed the ramen experience. The owner was interesting, and there were many JOJO-themed decorations.
After finishing my ramen, I bought corn soup and yogurt at the convenience store. The total price was a bit high, but I was satisfied.
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オープニングとエンディングが毎回面白すぎるから、本当にトークだけのライブもやってほしいな。主にM-1に向けた取り組みを振り返るみたいなの。まあ、全編お説教ライブになる可能性高いけど
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使ってる最中ならまだわかるけど使い終わってから結構時間も経ってるのにまだ使ってるみたいに重い
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というのを誰も見ていないであろう平日のお昼にツイートしていく、
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